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She sits by the window

Head in hand

Lost in her mystic

Wonderland

Where fairies fly free

Across the sky

And a beanstalk stretches

A million feet high

In a world where true love

Is a wish a way

She likes to laugh

And play all day

For when she’s gone

She cannot feel

The tears and pain

She must conceal

One slipper safe

One slipper gone

Among these tales

She can belong

In a world apart

To hope and dream

To sing and dance

To smile and scheme

But she must forget

For she is grown

The beautiful things

She once had known

Dull and seem to fade away

She can no longer sing and laugh and play

Now comes a time

To read and write

And the curse of age

She cannot fight

But when the lights

Are cool and dim

And the sky is fringed

With a starry trim

She sits by the window

Head in hand

Lost in her mystic

Wonderland
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Alice in Wonderland

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:iconwillow-rose:
I just absolutely LOVED this , I just loved it SO much! You are very talented!

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...Well isn't that just swell
:icongaryskito:
I liked how it rhymed and the use of repetition at the end....

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:iconveralou:
oooo...I love it very well written
:icontransatlanticvoyage:
wow
that is EXACTLY how i feel right now
you've captured the emotion very nicely
:icontangledconscious:
Excellent very nice!

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"You would only wish to know my purpose un yur sanity. But think of it devotedly enough and find yur deepest desires met. Sanity will stay, With my essence."
:iconcryingangel18:
Its beautiful, you are very rude PoeticWar.. i loved this, its very very nice.
:iconlady472:
Very beautiful, so stark and sad

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... And those who were seen to be dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music. Friedrich Nietzsche

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:iconironylit:
I like the repetitive simplistic style. It's very effective in this instance.

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Unacknowledged genius
:iconsilver-willow04:
I love this. I love how easily you painted a picture and how easily everything flowed. And you put together everything I love, fairies and Wonderlands! Deffinate fav!

-Willow-

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